-"Tor, and in general software that enables people to protect their "
-"electronic communications, is useful to anyone. It is not because "
-"Internet usually allows to know the origin of a communication than "
-"we should take advantage of this technical detail to put *everyone* "
-"under surveillance. Tor simply helps to use the Internet without "
-"being *presumed* guilty."
+"Tor, and in general software that enables people to protect their electronic "
+"communications, is useful to anyone. Because the internet usually allows "
+"services to know the origin of communications, services take advantage of "
+"this technical detail to put *everyone* under surveillance. Tor simply helps "
+"its users use the Internet without being *presumed* guilty."